My fanfic!

Im not good at writing stories but I wanted to see what yall think about my fanfic! I havent got a title for it yet so if yall think of a title please post it! Also if yall have any suggestions about making it better I would not mind at all for yall posting suggestions! Thank you! God bless! And I hope yall enjoy it! Raena Miu is Ahsoka's padawan!

Chapter one
It was too hot and crowded for a walk on Courascant, but Anakin didnt care. Meditating didnt take away the bad memories nor did Padme and the twins love. He could still remember the screams of pain and terror from the Jedi younglings. Anakin turned away from The Dark Side with help from Obi-Wan and Ahsoka. He could remember all these happenings all to well. Rex had gone into hiding for failing to do Order 66. He couldnt kill the Jedi he admired and fought along side with. "But Rex is back and its great to have his company again," Anakin thought. Ahsoka had her own padawan now and Obi-Wan also took on a new apprentice. Him and Satine also got married. Not all the Jedi were slaughtered because of Anakin. He told the troopers to stand down. But now the Jedi arent sure what to do with the Clones. Its hard for them to know if they can be trusted ever again. Anakin didnt know what to think, but he still trusts Rex with his life. But what about Bly, Gree, and all the others? Padme always tells Anakin, 'You worry to much Ani. Now stop worrying and play with Luke and Leia.' He couldnt help it. "Look at what I have done," Anakin thinks desperatly. "Im going home this walk isnt helping anything," Anakin mutters. When he got home he saw his grown-up padawan lifting Luke and Leia off the floor with The Force. "Hey Skyguy," Ahsoka greets. "Hello Snips its so great to see you!" "I sense alot of turmoil in you Master," says Ahsoka with concern in her voice. "I'll be fine Snips." "If you say so Master. Just dont worry about the past, just remember it will only get better in the future." "Thank you Ahsoka thats what I needed to hear. Where is Raena Miu?" "I told her to stay at the Temple and study Shili and Togruta history. I explained its good to learn about history from the place where she was born," Ahsoka laughs. "Does she want to study?" "No," Ahsoka laughs. "I remember when you didnt want to stay and study." "I still dont want to sit around and study I want to be on the front lines." "Where's Padme?" "She went to go pick of a few things from the market."
Ahsoka and Anakin waited around for many hours for Padme to return. "Ugh! She should be back by now," Anakin yells out. "Have patience Skyguy. You know I think I learend patience better than you." Anakin hears the blast door slide open and Padme walks through with a bag in each arm. After she set them down Anakin rushed and gave her a hug. "Hi Anni," Padme greets the man she loves. "I was so worried about you." "I just went to the market. Its not like a piece of Muji fruit will just jump out and attack me." "Well those fruits can be dangerous at times," Anakin laughs. "I just heard that Satine is having a girl." "What does Obi-Wan think of that?" "Hes very excited." "What does Sorn Kenobi think about getting a little baby sister?" "Hes very excited to get someone to play with." "What will they name her," Ahsoka asks Padme. "They have decided to name her Verena Kenobi." "Thats a really pretty name. If you will excuse me Skyguy and Padme I need to go check on Raena. She just constructed her lightsaber yesterday and I need to go make sure she's not using it on a fellow padawan." "What color did she decide," Anakin asks. "She chose blue." "Thats a great choice." "You only say that because you use a blue blade." "Well I am a amazing jedi arent I?" "No, sorry Skyguy but I am."
Ahsoka walked through the temple door pondering why all the things that were and had happened. "Why did the clones and Anakin turn, how did the jedi not see it coming, and what happpened to the galaxy? We wanted to end the war not create more! How did this happen?" "Hello Mater Tano!" Raena Miu startles her Master out of her thoughts. Raena was running her small tails barely reaching her shoulders, her montrels barely noticable, and her lightsaber swinging at her side. "She reminds me of me when I was young and just a padawan," Ahsoka thought. "Master I finished my studying!" "You did?" "Yep!" "Well lets do some training with your new lightsaber." "What will I be doing first with it?" "You are going to duel me." Meanwhile Obi-Wan wa praticing patience with his new and so very young apprentice Lorn Thano. "Lorn reach out with your senses. Feel the Force around you." "I am trying Master. But its hard to see with this blindfold on." "Well thats the whole part of this test my young padawan. You must not trust your eyes sense the training droid!" "I understand now my Master." "Good! Now concentrate!"
Ahsoka knew her young padawan was ready to face a Jedi Knight in a duel. But she could sense Raena's doubt.

That is so cute!!! I'm really liking it. Great Job Rex'sGirl!!!! My sister and I came up with a story sorta like that, where Obi-Wan and Satine get married and have kids, and Anakin and Padme talk to Ahsoka alot. It's really good, please write more!!!!

Jedi~Chick wrote:

That is so cute!!! I'm really liking it. Great Job Rex'sGirl!!!! My sister and I came up with a story sorta like that, where Obi-Wan and Satine get married and have kids, and Anakin and Padme talk to Ahsoka alot. It's really good, please write more!!!!

Thank you! I have more wrote my hand was starting to cramp Ill definatly write more! Im kind of on writers block right now but I know I can over come it! Im a SW fangirl for crying out loud!

Haha, I'm glad. I know, typing can sometimes give you cramps!!! That happens to me sometimes too. I'm working on a fanfic now, and I'm considering posting it later. I can't wait for more!!

Jedi~Chick wrote:

Haha, I'm glad. I know, typing can sometimes give you cramps!!! That happens to me sometimes too. I'm working on a fanfic now, and I'm considering posting it later. I can't wait for more!!

Ooooooohhhhh I bet its totally awesome! I bet its much better than mine!

Haha, I don't know, it's a lot different. I think yours is great!!! Mine is about Luke and Leia meeting before ANH, and (this is still a big work in progress) they become friends without knowing they are brother and sister. Then they both are captured on the DeathStar and Han comes to save the day somehow later. I was inspired to write this partially from some great stories on Fanfiction.net and also from a dream that I had. It was a really cool dream!!!!

Jedi~Chick wrote:

Haha, I don't know, it's a lot different. I think yours is great!!! Mine is about Luke and Leia meeting before ANH, and (this is still a big work in progress) they become friends without knowing they are brother and sister. Then they both are captured on the DeathStar and Han comes to save the day somehow later. I was inspired to write this partially from some great stories on Fanfiction.net and also from a dream that I had. It was a really cool dream!!!!

Thank you! That sounds so cool! I dont know where Im going with my story! I get very lucky when I have a SW dream!

Thanks! I almost always have SW dreams. So does my friend and occasionally my sister. My sis dreams in TCW!!!! It's so funny, she says that she looks good animated!! LOL! I have some kind of SW element in my dream, whether it's Darth Vader dancing in the background to Anakin popping out of nowhere and kissing me. *Now THAT was a good dream!!! LOL!*

Jedi~Chick wrote:

Thanks! I almost always have SW dreams. So does my friend and occasionally my sister. My sis dreams in TCW!!!! It's so funny, she says that she looks good animated!! LOL! I have some kind of SW element in my dream, whether it's Darth Vader dancing in the background to Anakin popping out of nowhere and kissing me. *Now THAT was a good dream!!! LOL!*

Lol! Who doesnt look good animated! Lol! I bet! If only I could have one like that but it would be Rex! That would be the best dream ever!

Haha!!! Yeah, my sister said she had a dream where she and Ahsoka went shopping and spent the day together. Then she taught my sister how to use and build a lightsaber. I was like, Where was I?!?! Apparently I was hanging with Anakin!!!!!

Jedi~Chick wrote:

Haha!!! Yeah, my sister said she had a dream where she and Ahsoka went shopping and spent the day together. Then she taught my sister how to use and build a lightsaber. I was like, Where was I?!?! Apparently I was hanging with Anakin!!!!!

Lol! That sounds like a awesome dream! Who wouldnt want to hang out with your SW man!

LOL I know right!!! I'm always dreaming of Ani....LOL!!

Lol! Im always thinking of Rex!

Haha, I figured as much!!! I'm the same way with Anakin though, so I totally understand!

Lol! Im glad you understand!I totally understand what you feel!

LOL THis is great! We understand each other!!! LOL!!! I'm going to see if I can download my story from my Laptop, it's going to be harder to input it here, because our family just got a new computer and I'm not sure if it has the same Word document thing...I'll check...

I cant wait to see it! I bet it is a AMAZING story! I know what you mean we have had our computer for many months and Im still learning stuff about it! Lol!

Thank you Leia!

Great story!!! I love reading stories where Anakin doesn't turn bad!

Im trying to think of more but I have writers block but I do have Raena and Ahsoka's duel wrote down I just have to type it on here! Ill do it ASAP!

Loved it!!!! Good job rex i love that he turned back. he turned back on the ROTJ right?? Just before he died??

Thanks yes he did!