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Duchess Satine Kenobi
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|  Subject: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story  Mon Apr 11, 2011 6:41 pm | |
| This was originally my story for the newsletter, but it got too long, so I'm going to post it here instead. This is my first story I'm going to post. I've always been too nervous, and I still am really nervous, but I today I figured if it's terrible and everyone hates it, then I'll just work harder to improve.  I got the idea when we had the smiley battle and I said something about Mace Windu and my Kowakian Monkey Lizards. This story goes into more detail about that. *takes deep breath* Here's where the fun begins  Also, if you have any advice, I'd be really happy to hear! I haven't learned much about writing, so any advice or tips would be GREATLY appreciated! Thanks and may the force be with you, DutchessSatineKenobi EDIT: Sorry, I had to remove my story for personal reasons.  ANOTHER EDIT: Eh, I'm glad I removed that, because it was pretty embarrassing XD
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Rex'sgirl
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Mon Apr 11, 2011 6:44 pm | |
| Wow! I love it!! I can't wait to read more!! | |
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allishmalli
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Mon Apr 11, 2011 6:48 pm | |
| I loved it, DSK! Great job! | |
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Jedi~Chick
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Mon Apr 11, 2011 7:20 pm | |
| Satine, that's awesome!!!! I'm surprised! It was very well written! And funny!!! Mace Windu just LOVES to yell, doesn't he? I like the way you wrote it, in first person, it was done very well. Kathleen is awesome. LOL!!! Great work, and keep on writing!!! I wanna read more!!!!!!!!!  | |
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Rachel-is-a-Jedi
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Mon Apr 11, 2011 7:38 pm | |
| That was so funny! I was literally laughing out loud when Quinlan spit the seed in Obi-Wan's eye! When my sister asked why I was laughing I told her and she laughed too! It was very well written, I love your writing style!  Can't wait for more!  <3 Rachel | |
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Duchess Satine Kenobi
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:53 pm | |
| Thank you all so much Your comments mean a whole lot to me. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:39 am | |
| This was very well written Satine! I laughed so hard when I read the part about Quinlan You also did a great job writing in first person. I'd love to see more keep up the great work | |
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sokafan4ever
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Tue Apr 12, 2011 3:20 pm | |
| Wow DSK! That was REALLY good! Can't wate to read more:) | |
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Duchess Satine Kenobi
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Tue Apr 12, 2011 3:23 pm | |
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Duchess Satine Kenobi
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Wed Apr 13, 2011 4:47 pm | |
| Thanks Leia | |
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Arda_Ancalima
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Fri Apr 15, 2011 1:58 pm | |
| That was really fun--especially Quinlan! Looking forward to part two! | |
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Duchess Satine Kenobi
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| | Subject: Re: Duchess Satine Kenobi's Story Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:29 pm | |
| Thanks Arda_Ancalima!
I probably won't have part two up this weekend after all, I got back from a school trip last night at midnight, and I'm really tired. | |
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