~~Avalon~~

I kno!!Everyones gonna get awesomer as it goes on!Yay!

Chapter three should be up soon! In a few days I promise:)

Yay, because I love this, Gabby!

lol thanks japor

Bad news:(
No more avalon till monday!
Ive hit a writers block and I gotta go to my grannys house for a while but if i can get it done tonight ill put it up tomorro!
Promise!

Thanks Leia!Ch3 should be up by monday

I love it! Can't wait for more! (I feel like I write that on every fanfic. hmm...) Anyways, I love LOTR! Havent read the books (just the Hobbit) and have seen the first two movies.

Hey!!Im back!New avalon chapter should be up tonight or tommorro!!!

Yay!

Cool, can't wait!

Hey yall!I know I know im sorry i havent posted ch3 yet but with trevor here, ive been so busy and im sorry:( But!Heres a preview for ya:)

Chapter Three preview!!!

I hit the ground below hard and Jayden fell beside me. But instead of falling to my death like I thought I was going to, I fell into a new world. A mysterious, awe strikingly beautiful world. The night sky was clear and was filled woth millions of glimmering stars. The grass tall lush green gras was nearly knee deep, with wildflowers adding pops of pink, gold and blue colors in a sea of endless green. I brought myself onto my feet and looked around at everything, taking in every beautiful new thing, every new sight.
"Where, Where are we?" I asked, still in awe.
Jayden smiled and walked over to my side
"Avalon" He said softly into the cool breeze. I shook my head in disbelif. This place had beuaty only found in movies.
"It cant be. Avalon is a fictional realm that only exists in thirteenth century mythology. It cant be real. Neither the people who inhabit it. Its all a myth."
"But it is real. And so are we"
I looked at Jayden, confused.
"We?" I asked him "You mean I'm real. I'm human."
"That's what you think. But your not. And I'm not one either." He tucked a section of dark brown hair behind his ear. He reached over towards me and tucked a ringlet of my blonde hair behind my right ear. "See? Our ears are the same." He put his arm next to mine "Same complection." Both his skin and mine was a rich ivory color. "And we're tall, like others of our kind."
He was right. I resembled the elves I read about in books. But still, it couldn't be real, could it?

Awesome!!!!!!!! I can't wait for more Gabby!!!!!

I love it Gabby!

Beautiful description Gabby! And oooh, she's an elf!!

Keep writing, this is like LotR awesomeness!!

Oh and don't worry, everyone gets busy! Have fun with Trevor!! You only get to see him right now and later we'll still be online.

I LOVE it!

Great job so far! Can't wait for more!