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Rex told them that when the worm woke up, all of the nitrous oxide (laughing gas) came out of his pores and knocked Rex out. But he still didn't know how it escaped. There were no holes or anything to indicate that it had even escaped, but then there was no sign of it anywhere.
"It's... like it vanished into thin air." Ahsoka said after they searched the entire ship.
"This is getting strange." Anakin replied. "Very strange."
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"Wait master what's that nasty smell?" said Ahsoka
"um...Ahsoka what is that thing that's behind you?!" says Rex
"Ahsoka move!" Says Anakin
"Only if you tell me who you were talking to on the holocom!" Says Ahsoka
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Anakin was panicking. Rex was standing right there. "Ahsoka!!! Now!!!!" Rex looked from Master to Apprentice. Then seeing a very small worm directly behind Ahsoka, reared up ready to spray it's venom, he stepped on it. The tight silence in the room was broken with a squelch. The bug was dead.....and it was on Rex's shoe. "Rex!" Ahoska said, spinning around, "Rex, what did you do?" Rex grinned. "I think I killed it sir." Ahsoka laughed. Anakin did too. "So Snip...Ahsoka, you want to peel that thing off his boot? We'll be coming up on Coruscant any minute now." Ahsoka nodded, and watched as Anakin walked back into the cockpit. After helping Rex scrape the bug guts off of his shoe, Ahsoka silently walked towards the cockpit, eager to find out if her Master was on the comm with his lover once again. "No, I don't have a landing permit. I'm trying to reach the Jedi Temple." Ahsoka frowned. He was just having trouble getting the ship landed, nothing about a girlfriend. She was bummed. Then Ahsoka wondered if Master Obi-Wan knew anything about Anakin's private life. After all, he WAS his master! She decided to make a stop at Obi-Wan's quarters when they got to the temple. Rex left the cargo bay still a bit groggy from his "nap". The bug was safely in a jar and safely tucked inside a box. That thing was dead. Now he didn't have to worry about it anylonger. Rex met up with Ahsoka and Anakin in the cockpit, leaving the bug alone. Although it looked dead, the bug was very much alive. The squashed remains bonded back together and began to expand once again......

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Great job so far girls!!! I really like this story! I'm not sure how we'll work in our Jedi Fortune Cookie yet....but I'm sure it'll get there!! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Group Fanfic!   Group Fanfic! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Feb 06, 2011 7:17 pm

Ok I'm just brain dead kuz we can't let Ahsoka go see obi wan kuz that would just mess it up:/ so any ideas???...I think we just need to brain storm on a story line for a while :/ I thin that in the end we should have Annie and Padme` tell Ahsoka so what are some other ideas?
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I also think that we might need to change the Jedi fortune cookie because I'm not sure how we can make the story go with it.
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Yah now that I think of it we should any ideas!
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Yeah. I didn't really think the Obi-Wan thing through too well.....hmmmmm, maybe she PLANS to go see him, but ends up following Anakin to lunch instead. I definitely think Ahsoka should find out about Anakin and Padme. That will be awesome. Also, we probably should change our fortune cookie, but I'm not sure to what. Maybe something along the lines of "not hiding the truth" or something like that. Also, whats going to happen with the bug? Will the Jedi just get rid of it on Coruscant???

I really like what we have so far though. i keep writing alot! Wink Probably too much! LOL! Everyone is doing a really great job. Did y'all like my ESB quote at the end of my last story post??? Wink LOL!
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Yup! Ok maby "Don't hide the inner you!"
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"The truth will set you free." *Gasps* Maybe we could change the story to where all of them will get captured and "the truth sets them free"! So... what do you think?
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OOOH! That's good!!! Somehow they get captured, and it leads Anakin to have to tell the truth!! That would be so cool!!! Great idea Allishmalli!!!

P.S. I really like your signature. I love that movie! Wink
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Okay, so we can start back up again?

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PostSubject: Re: Group Fanfic!   Group Fanfic! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeMon Feb 07, 2011 10:43 am

Okay! Please remember to start a new paragraph when someone new talks especially if you typed a really long paragraph! Also, I think we should have a new thread for discussion of ideas, so we don't disrupt the story.
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To tell the truth guys, I'm not sure what's going on with this group fanfic. I'm just going to continue where we left off.

The worm got bigger and bigger and bigger. Then it suddenly stopped growing. Legs burst out and teeth started growing in. Black fur shot out of it's body, and it slid quitely out of the box.. Then it started growing once again.

It headed towards the voices and footsteps it heard. The animal couldn't think. It went on instinct.

Currently it's only instinct was to kill....

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PostSubject: Re: Group Fanfic!   Group Fanfic! - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Feb 13, 2011 9:40 pm

Ok well I'm I'm not that good at the whole worm thing so I think we should maby have certin people be incharge of certin things?! I'll take charge of all the Padme` scenes kuz I'm good at the whole Padme personality?! Well I kinda would like some feed back about my writing?! So if some one REALLY had there heart set on Writing all if the padme` scenes then they can do it but if not I will:). MTFBWY
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Well, what are we going to do, guys? Personally I liked how it was going before.

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I liked it too! Why don't we just wing it? Who cares if it's structured?!? Do you think George Lucas has structure in mind when he created all the craziness of Mortis and the SW movies?!?! LOL! Wink Razz
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Yah I now agree
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Back on couracant Anakin us on his way to meet Padmè for lunch but he docent know that ahsokas following him!

"Annie! Oh how I've missed you!" crystal Padmè!
"I've missed you too Padmè!" replies Anakin
Ahsoka thinks "Padmè! Padmè's Skyguys lover! No that can't be she's a senator and he's a Jedi! But then again they do look cute together though!"
"So Padmè where do you want to go?" ask's Anakin
"Oh let's go to Dex's diner!!!" replies Padmè!

Ok y'all so sense we haven't been working on this lately I kinda wanted to get back to doing it?!
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Ok y'all so did we just give up on this or what????
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Anakin and Padme with Ahsoka sneakly following go to Dex's Diner.
"Anakin," Dex greets the young jedi.
"Hello Dex," Anakin tells Obi-Wan's great friend.
"Table for two I think," Dex winks.
"You thought correct Dex. This is Padme Amidala," Anakin introduces Padme.
"Nice to meet you Padme. Right this way please," Dex sets them at the table.
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While Dex is in the kitchen Anaikin asks...
"So Padmè how have you been doing!"
"Well being a seitor is hard work and...and(Padmè starts to brake down sobbing) one of my best friends just died!!!" Replies Padmè
"Oh Honey...I am so sorry! Who was it?" Anakin replies very concerned.
"It was Mina Bonteri even though she was a Seperatist she was still a good friend!" says Padmè while she is still sobbing.
"Padmè it'll be ok!" soothes Anakin
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Ahsoka thinking to her self: Oh no! how terable, Mina was so nice... and so was her son. thats just terrable. I need to hear more of this conversation!

she crept closer to the table. She knew that technally she wasnt sposto listen, but she couldnt help it

Padme: ...and poor Lux, he is now an orphan and I dont know if he has any family...

Ahsoka felt terrable for Lux. It was one thing to be taken from your family when you were little to become a Jedi, but to have known somebody and then to know you would never see them again was worse.

Padme:... I just hope he dosent make any bad choices.

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I hope you liked it! all of you have been doing a wonderful job!


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